Hi Everyone,
As we are having so much fun with collaborations…Here is the next one…This will also be open for one week, so till next Sunday. Please place your contribution in the comment section and I will add it as they come. As always I will put the contributor’s name in the same colour as their contribution at the end of the piece and in the same order. Hope everyone has fun with this one like they had with the last one! 🙂 Again if you wish to use it as a separate prompt you can do so as well, just add the link of this page. I will only take contributions added in the comment section. Thank you! 🙂
I land on my forgotten dreams,
from the lost window of my mind,
as they drift away to far off places,
leaving no traces behind…
Trying to remember what I’ve forgot
To forgot what I remember
My mind plays with me
Or is it other way around?
Scared, I turn to my heart
Silent
My heart has no need to play with words
Thoughts and images
I ask a question not needed to be asked
“Help me?”
Pulsing it soothes me with the primeval song
And I know
I know my dream.
I return here
for a moment
to this mysterious place
that for so long seemed
so far away
Years together
I have been waiting for you
Succumbing to the pain
I look through the window pane
For a moment, my thoughts stick on the space between us
Not realizing space is meaningless
We separate ourselves by emotion, culture, experience
Yet are only so far apart as a moment of thought, connecting our spirits
Distance is no match for my memory of you
Your smell, your form, the delicate way you turn your eyes
In my direction, your touch…
And my anticipation of your return shows
In the path I’ve worn, leaving pieces of my heart
On this window sill and the doorstep and the steps between
Oh, how I long to step out
walk free
I’ve been locked inside this room for eternity
The fear I know is only in my mind
yet I can’t break free
So I will look out the window of opportunity
and put off my decision
till another day
Move on, move on,
Oh sad and lonely soul.
Your eyes are athirst
For the water in a mirage;
In truth, the jug was never as large
As you recall.
As thus, you’re longing and lingering
For a false love;
For sooth, it was never there at all.
Look ahead, look ahead,
Be careful, lest you fall again,
For the figurine in your dream
Will crack and tumble down,
It will break and scatter on the ground.
Alas, it’s the shards of glass to penetrate your heart
For wanting what was never yours.
Arise, move on, move on,
Oh dreamer of the night.
observing the horizon, with hopeful eyes
awaiting for a New dawn after this tormenting night
a night walker I had become
on this so elaborated land
I used to have control over here
but my mind has gone crazy, missing you indeed
here and there I observe my forgotten dreams
all destroyed, burned or simply over and gone
Only one star above leading my way
watching all, seeing nothing
feeling pain for the forgotten love
missing all, having nothing
I sail on grey forgotten seas
from dreams remembered
of damaged things
Night sky wanes with dimming stars
I struggle to awaken from afar
Contributors: Me (Neha), Ivyon,In the Stillness… Laurie’s Gentle Healing Notes, upenreddy, thelandlineblog, lorriebowden, kharismaceyworksnovels,artes del viento,bluerock / debrazone
June 15, 2014 at 5:33 pm
Oh my goodness, your poem is so fabulous–and what an evocative photo, love the black and white. I may decide to use it as a prompt, and give you the link as requested–so in that case, is the photo the prompt? Or the lines you wrote? Thanks always for stirring the creative waters!
June 15, 2014 at 5:35 pm
aww thank you so much Starr, if you want to use it as a prompt you can use either 🙂 🙂 ❤
June 15, 2014 at 5:36 pm
Okey dokey–thanks much, again!!!!
June 15, 2014 at 5:41 pm
You’re welcome 🙂
June 15, 2014 at 5:34 pm
Are there any rules to participate? 🙂 Except to write in the comments
June 15, 2014 at 5:37 pm
Nope just go with the flow of what inspires you, and how it fits with the piece as it is a collaboration 🙂 If you check out the previous ones you can get an idea here ~https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2014/06/07/calling-all-poetscreative-minds-writing-letters-by-the-moonlight/
June 15, 2014 at 5:50 pm
Great, thank you!
June 15, 2014 at 6:08 pm
I wrote a Laurie Note with inspiration from here and your comment..
http://lauriesnotes.wordpress.com/2014/06/15/a-quiet-whisper-of-hope/
June 15, 2014 at 6:14 pm
Trying to remember what I’ve forgot
To forgot what I remember
My mind plays with me
Or is it other way around?
Scared, I turn to my heart
Silent
My heart has no need to play with words
Thoughts and images
I ask a question not needed to be asked
“Help me?”
Pulsing it soothes me with the primaeval song
And I know
I know my dream.
Hehe, i hope you like it 🙂 It is difficult to express in another language
June 15, 2014 at 6:52 pm
That is perfect! thank you so much for sharing 🙂 I just changed the spelling of “primaeval” to “primeval” as it prompted me to. Hope you are ok with that 🙂 Thank you again for your beautiful contribution 🙂
June 15, 2014 at 6:57 pm
Definitely, I had to had a meeting with Google for that word and he told me to wote it like that 😀
I’m glad you like it, enjoy the rest of your Sunday and relax… (If you live here that is aprox. 5 minutes hehe)
June 15, 2014 at 6:59 pm
haha you enjoy the last five mins too and have a good night! 🙂 I live in Canada so it is just about to be seven pm here 🙂 …Have a wonderful week and sweet dreams 🙂
June 15, 2014 at 7:02 pm
Ty… 😀 Meh… You have the whole day still 😉
I’m about to watch Meet the Robinsons, animated movie that will make me sleepy hehe…
June 15, 2014 at 7:03 pm
hehe nice! Have fun 😀
June 15, 2014 at 8:25 pm
I return here
for a moment
to this mysterious place
that for so long seemed
so far away
(Came back to play 🙂 )
June 15, 2014 at 11:23 pm
That is so lovely Laurie, thank you so much for coming back to share it 🙂 It has been added.
June 15, 2014 at 11:30 pm
🙂
June 15, 2014 at 11:55 pm
Years together
I have been waiting for you
Succumbing to the pain
I look through the window pane
June 16, 2014 at 9:17 am
beautiful and melancholic, thank you for the contribution! It has been added 🙂
June 16, 2014 at 10:15 am
Yes, they are fun and I love doing them so I get to read all the beautiful pieces you all share! Thank you for sharing that lovely piece it has been added 🙂
June 16, 2014 at 8:09 pm
I am glad that you liked it:))
June 16, 2014 at 3:09 am
For a moment, my thoughts stick on the space between us
Not realizing space is meaningless
We separate ourselves by emotion, culture, experience
Yet are only so far apart as a moment of thought, connecting our spirits
Distance is no match for my memory of you
Your smell, your form, the delicate way you turn your eyes
In my direction, your touch…
And my anticipation of your return shows
In the path I’ve worn, leaving pieces of my heart
On this window sill and the doorstep and the steps between
June 16, 2014 at 9:17 am
That is lovely, thank you so much for sharing 🙂 It has been added 🙂
June 16, 2014 at 9:44 am
Thanks for another one Neha!! How much fun!
Oh, how I long to step out
walk free
I’ve been locked inside this room for eternity
The fear I know is only in my mind
yet I can’t break free
So I will look out the window of opportunity
and put off my decision
till another day
June 16, 2014 at 7:21 pm
We are doing so well with collaborations, we should write a song for the world to sing! Poetry is like lyrics…Do we have a musician in the house? :0) Collaboration is something I’ve been wanting to try for awhile…so glad you got the courage to put it out there…You are inspiring!
June 16, 2014 at 8:04 pm
aww thank you it is a lot of fun doing this! Do join in if you think of something!
June 17, 2014 at 3:35 am
http://madwomanofghostharbor.com/2014/06/17/shadow-land/
June 17, 2014 at 8:07 am
Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog….. An Author Promotions Enterprise! and commented:
This is a follow up of my re-blog on 15th June – Neha’s latest challenge to poets 😀
June 17, 2014 at 8:49 am
Thank you for the reblog 🙂
June 17, 2014 at 8:55 am
Welcome Neha, there’s a poem in MY comments box that I’ve told the author to post in YOUR comments box instead, but just in case, call over and check it out (copy and paste it if you like) 😀
June 17, 2014 at 8:56 am
O really! I will go check it out and thanks for letting me know 🙂
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June 17, 2014 at 10:34 am
Hi Neha, I hope this is where I leave the poem. I’ve also posted it on another site consisting of poems.
SHADOWS IN A DREAM
By Kharis Macey
Move on, move on,
Oh sad and lonely soul.
Your eyes are athirst
For the water in a mirage;
In truth, the jug was never as large
As you recall.
As thus, you’re longing and lingering
For a false love;
For sooth, it was never there at all.
Look ahead, look ahead,
Be careful, lest you fall again,
For the figurine in your dream
Will crack and tumble down,
It will break and scatter on the ground.
Alas, it’s the shards of glass to penetrate your heart
For wanting what was never yours.
Arise, move on, move on,
Oh dreamer of the night.
June 17, 2014 at 10:40 am
That’s perfect, thank you so much for taking the time to do this…it has been added 🙂
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June 20, 2014 at 4:58 pm
observing the horizon, with hopeful eyes
awaiting for a New dawn after this tormenting night
a night walker I had become
on this so elaborated land
I used to have control over here
but my mind has gone crazy, missing you indeed
here and there I observe my forgotten dreams
all destroyed, burned or simply over and gone
Only one start above leading my way
watching all, seeing nothing
feeling pain for the forgotten love
missing all, having nothing
June 20, 2014 at 5:07 pm
Sorry, I just re check and it was “Only one star” an additional t wanted to become part of the post 🙂
June 20, 2014 at 9:35 pm
sad and melancholic beautifully expressed 🙂 It has been added and the “start” changed to “star” 🙂
June 20, 2014 at 9:43 pm
I hope you liked it. It was what appears to me to be added
June 20, 2014 at 9:45 pm
Yes Of course 🙂 It was very nice!
June 22, 2014 at 8:03 pm
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:
Here is the final product 🙂 Please click on original! Thanks everyone 🙂
June 22, 2014 at 8:39 pm
I sail on grey forgotten seas
from dreams remembered
of damaged things
Night sky wanes with dimming stars
I struggle to awaken from afar
June 22, 2014 at 8:39 pm
OOPS… I just realized I missed the deadline.
June 22, 2014 at 10:36 pm
hey I can still add it if you want me to, let me know 🙂
June 22, 2014 at 11:01 pm
Ok, thanks!
June 22, 2014 at 11:06 pm
No Problem, it is a beautiful contribution and it has been added 🙂
June 22, 2014 at 11:08 pm
Thank you ❤
June 22, 2014 at 11:09 pm
You’re most welcome 🙂 ❤
June 22, 2014 at 11:10 pm
Thank you for contributing 🙂 and technically there is still 50 mins left for Sunday to be officially over 😉 it’s all good.
June 22, 2014 at 8:41 pm
It’s okay, I’ll use it for a new poem. 🙂
June 23, 2014 at 11:00 am
Lovely! I’m sorry I missed participating…hopefully you will do another of these after fulfilling your other summer responsibilities….:-)
June 23, 2014 at 11:03 am
Thanks Laura, yes I will definitely do more soon 🙂 I might start one and keep one open for the whole summer 😀 actually that is a good idea hmmm
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July 8, 2014 at 10:29 am
Reblogged this on Step by step, one post at a time and commented:
I have contributed for forgottenmeadows colaboration poem and it was great fun… 😀 It is lovely and she makes a new theme every week.
Mine is the second one starting with “Trying to remember…”
July 8, 2014 at 10:32 am
Thank you so much for the reblog, friend and of course for your contribution to make this a success! 🙂
July 8, 2014 at 10:36 am
😀 You are welcome, I love the whole poem… It goes in the tone of that specific author and yet continues. Nice 🙂
July 8, 2014 at 10:39 am
Yes, I love it too! 😀