I lay,
listening to the quiet sound
of summer rain…
tapping on the forgotten window
of my heart,
writing poetry on earth.
free google image, poem copyright neha 2018
Writing
forgottenmeadows
thoughts from my mind to yours
forgottenmeadows
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June 20, 2018 at 8:39 am
This is so peaceful. Great ending line too.
June 28, 2018 at 8:46 am
Thank you so much! 🙂
June 28, 2018 at 11:37 am
You’re very welcome.
June 20, 2018 at 9:13 am
And you do write fabulous poetry Neha.
June 28, 2018 at 8:47 am
Thank you so much for the kind words!
June 20, 2018 at 10:36 am
What a beautiful piece of work to wake me up better than morning coffee. With a hint of a challenge calling me to remember windows, and rain. Thank you.
June 28, 2018 at 8:47 am
Thank you so very much! 🙂
June 20, 2018 at 2:17 pm
Excellent! 😎🥀
June 28, 2018 at 8:47 am
Thank you Dorna! 🙂
June 20, 2018 at 3:21 pm
Your poems bring such peace to my racing thoughts 🙂
June 28, 2018 at 8:47 am
aww I am glad, thank you so much for your kind words always!
June 20, 2018 at 7:29 pm
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June 28, 2018 at 8:47 am
Thank you John!
June 28, 2018 at 10:41 am
You are very welcome.
June 20, 2018 at 10:00 pm
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June 28, 2018 at 8:48 am
Thank you so much for the reblog!
June 29, 2018 at 7:59 pm
always!
June 21, 2018 at 8:16 am
Itss a beautiful poem apart from humdrum….loved it….
June 28, 2018 at 8:48 am
Thank you very much!
June 21, 2018 at 2:39 pm
Rain sings to those who care to listen and understand. Beautiful piece!!!
June 28, 2018 at 8:48 am
Thank you so much Chrissy!
June 23, 2018 at 2:10 pm
I love your poems Neha! This one captures summer beautifully! I wish you a beautiful weekend.
June 28, 2018 at 8:49 am
Thank you so much Roland! Have a great weekend ahead!
June 25, 2018 at 2:05 am
Beautiful!
June 28, 2018 at 8:49 am
Thank you so much!
June 25, 2018 at 2:17 am
There is always so much beauty and truth in all your words, Neha. I like that the quietness of rain allows reflective thoughts to write such a beautiful poem. Love this image: “tapping on the forgotten window/ of my heart”
June 28, 2018 at 8:49 am
Thank you so very much for the kind comment my friend! 🙂
June 28, 2018 at 2:11 pm
You are welcome.
June 26, 2018 at 2:34 am
its reflecting tranqulity..beautiful 🙂
July 8, 2018 at 4:17 am
this poem is so deep and sympathised, its beautiful but rough with truth. I love this! My favourite part is, ‘Writing poetry on earth.’ It takes alot to understand. I well definetly follow! check out my blog at:
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July 23, 2018 at 9:10 am
Thank you very much, I will check it out soon!
July 10, 2018 at 3:59 am
Very nice poem
July 23, 2018 at 9:10 am
Thank you!
July 11, 2018 at 3:34 pm
I am impressed that you can capture such profoundness in only a few words.
July 23, 2018 at 9:11 am
Thank you very much!
July 14, 2018 at 11:02 am
Simple yet beautiful.
July 23, 2018 at 9:11 am
Thank you!
July 17, 2018 at 5:44 am
Fab, beautiful 😀
July 23, 2018 at 9:12 am
Thank you!
July 27, 2018 at 6:55 pm
A wonderful creation of beautiful images. so well done. ☺❤
August 2, 2018 at 9:42 am
Thank you kindly!
August 2, 2018 at 12:52 pm
You’re very welcome! ☺
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July 27, 2018 at 11:52 pm
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August 2, 2018 at 9:42 am
Thank you for the reblog
July 29, 2018 at 8:12 pm
This feels relatable! Beautiful!
August 2, 2018 at 9:41 am
Thank you very much!
August 2, 2018 at 9:41 am
No problem! 🙂
August 5, 2018 at 12:58 am
Nice! The photo is very beautiful, so is the poem. 🙂 Keep it up
August 23, 2018 at 9:09 am
Thank you very much!
August 7, 2018 at 1:18 pm
Lovely! I love short poetry that evokes so much
August 23, 2018 at 9:11 am
Thank you very much!
August 10, 2018 at 6:44 am
I very much love it myself, as a young writer you inspire me to do more. This was very simple yet elegant, not many words yet not to short, you spoke what you meant and I really like that.
August 23, 2018 at 9:11 am
Thank you for your kind thoughts!
August 17, 2018 at 1:51 am
This is so calming. I love it! 🙂
August 23, 2018 at 9:12 am
Thank you glad you liked it!
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August 25, 2018 at 12:47 am
This is so beautiful ❤
August 30, 2018 at 8:42 am
Thank you!
September 1, 2018 at 4:51 am
Very Nice
September 1, 2018 at 10:47 am
Thank you!
September 2, 2018 at 11:43 am
This is so beautiful, yet very concise. I love your writing!
September 6, 2018 at 9:31 am
Thank you!
September 2, 2018 at 5:23 pm
Beautiful words. Short but sweet!
September 18, 2018 at 9:35 am
Thank you!
September 12, 2018 at 11:19 am
Beautiful ❤
September 13, 2018 at 8:02 am
Thank you!
September 13, 2018 at 2:18 pm
Short but powerful! I love it, especially the line: tapping on the forgotten window of my heart.
October 24, 2018 at 5:04 pm
That evocative image that gives so much depth to an already short and powerful poem. The whole “window” imagery is beautiful.
November 15, 2018 at 12:43 pm
Thank you so much!
October 29, 2018 at 6:59 pm
Awesome✨, I love the sense of peace in this one, it gives a relieving reflective experience.
November 15, 2018 at 12:42 pm
Thank you!
May 5, 2020 at 8:31 am
Lovely little poem. Like the “less is more” approach. Pic helps too
May 6, 2020 at 8:16 am
Thank you so much