forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Golden

16 Comments

Splatter of gold,

Β on the sky,

as the sun falls,

on the forgotten dreams,

through that broken window.

 

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

16 thoughts on “Golden

  1. I really like this – golden but poignant…that broken window. Wonderful line.

  2. Oh, so so poetical and lyrical and dreamy!! πŸ™‚

  3. Sad… 😦
    Well written though. :)!

  4. sometimes we find gold in sadness – this is one those times

  5. That broken window broke my heart.yes i always find some beautiful words in your poem that transforms your good poems to great ones.i think i have learned some tips in writing poems from you πŸ™‚

  6. and do you watch football?sorry for what happened to neimer, even in a boxing game i guess hitting someone hard is not right and brazil vs argentina final and my messy hitting the wining goal what a dream will it happen?

  7. Very beautiful poetry, but I also love how you always find the perfect picture to go with each poem πŸ™‚

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