She let her fallen tears,
cleanse her bruised heart.
Sometimes, one found the less traveled paths
that led to joy
by letting go of expectations.
poetry copyright neha 2018, image borrowed from Sue Vincent
In response to Sue’s Prompt – Fallen #WritePhoto
May 10, 2018 at 11:53 am
Stupendous-ly Beautiful. ππ₯ππ₯ππ₯ππ₯ππ₯
May 11, 2018 at 7:57 am
Thank you Dorna!
May 10, 2018 at 12:36 pm
Very beautiful, and I especially like your line about letting go of expectations.
May 11, 2018 at 7:57 am
Thank you so much Sue! β€
May 11, 2018 at 8:23 am
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May 10, 2018 at 1:39 pm
Bittersweet wisdom to learn..
May 11, 2018 at 7:57 am
Thank you Syl! π
May 11, 2018 at 12:43 pm
Youβre welcome, Neha! π
May 10, 2018 at 2:02 pm
Expectations can destroy so much. A hard lesson to learn.
May 11, 2018 at 7:57 am
Thank you dear Erika, that true π
May 11, 2018 at 3:50 pm
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May 10, 2018 at 2:21 pm
Beautiful ππ
May 11, 2018 at 7:57 am
Thank you so much!
May 11, 2018 at 9:19 am
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May 10, 2018 at 2:27 pm
Good point about letting go of expectations.
May 11, 2018 at 7:58 am
Thank you very much!
May 10, 2018 at 2:30 pm
Such wisdom into beautiful words of yours, Neha. Loved it.
May 11, 2018 at 7:58 am
Thank you so much Megha, glad you liked it!
May 10, 2018 at 3:31 pm
hi there forgottenmeadowws , a very nice ; yet short poem , make it bigger
May 11, 2018 at 7:58 am
Thank you!
May 10, 2018 at 3:54 pm
Deeply beautiful!
May 11, 2018 at 7:58 am
Thank you so much!
May 12, 2018 at 5:09 pm
Most welcome!
May 10, 2018 at 7:09 pm
Very moving.
May 11, 2018 at 7:58 am
Thank you!
May 10, 2018 at 7:40 pm
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
May 11, 2018 at 7:59 am
Thank you John!
May 11, 2018 at 12:28 pm
You are welcome, Neha.
May 11, 2018 at 1:15 am
Beautiful
May 11, 2018 at 7:59 am
Thank you so much!
May 11, 2018 at 1:45 am
So beautifully true Neha
May 11, 2018 at 7:59 am
Thank you Marie β€
May 11, 2018 at 3:09 am
As an old saying goes, ‘Without your knowing, your expectations might be undermining your happiness.’ Glad she let her expectations go along with her tears. Well written poem.
May 11, 2018 at 7:59 am
Thank you very much!
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May 12, 2018 at 9:19 am
Lovely sentiment and so true.
May 14, 2018 at 9:45 am
Thank you so much!
May 12, 2018 at 12:46 pm
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May 17, 2018 at 8:05 am
Loved the Round up!