forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Paper Boats

13 Comments

You and I
sailed on paper boats
Amidst the sea of stars,
In a dream of a dream
That vanished behind the crimson dawn.

 

poetry and image copyright neha 2019

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

13 thoughts on “Paper Boats

  1. Lovely imagery Neha! Paper boats, crimson skies, dreams and more dreams… 🙂

  2. Fantabulous scenes! 🥀😎

  3. In a drema of dream..reminds me of the Edgar Allen Poe’s poem.Beautifully written.

  4. Beautiful poem and photo. I am curious how long does it take you to write a poem. Do you come up with themes first? You write beautifully!

  5. I liked your line “That vanished behind the crimson dawn”, I’ve had mornings like that.

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