thoughts from my mind to yours

That day


That day…

The world forgot to be kind,

and you forgot to be patient,

and in between figuring out who you were,

and where you came from,

and why you were here,

the clouds of life,

poured on you,

and your heart cried with the rain…


when it was over,

and though the world did not change,

you felt lighter and soul felt cleansed,

and you noticed the smiles among the frowns,

and drenched in what was your pain,

you found that little piece of joy again,

you followed the rainbow of life.

copyright neha 2015

copyright neha 2015

Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

26 thoughts on “That day

  1. Nice. I just also wrote a poet piece on rain!

  2. Lovely! 🙂 ❤ Beautiful! ❤ and utterly gorgeous! ❤ 🙂

  3. Wonderful write. Beautiful

  4. Beautiful poem!~ Sending you all my best wishes!. Aquileana

  5. Reblogged this on A Grateful Man and commented:
    I loved experiencing this beautiful creation. It so well captures the feelings.

    With Love,

  6. I greatly enjoyed experiencing this beautiful creation, and re-blogged it.

  7. Really enjoyed this! Had me take a deep look into myself

  8. So powerful Neha …its raining today, but in a good way! “:)

  9. What a beautiful thought provoking poem. ❤

  10. Thanks for the share…exceptional poem. 😀

  11. It is touching and beautiful. Rain is not all about the pain, there is a beauty in there. It reminds me that when things get bad and tough don’t mean it will stay that way. All we have to do just stay, go through the rain without losing our faith. Sometimes it is easy to feel down when things being too hard that we let our faith slip through our finger replaced by negativity that can kill our soul. Leave us coldhearted. I like how this poem talking much too me in a simple way with the rain and the rainbow as its metaphor.

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