That day…
The world forgot to be kind,
and you forgot to be patient,
and in between figuring out who you were,
and where you came from,
and why you were here,
the clouds of life,
poured on you,
and your heart cried with the rain…
but,
when it was over,
and though the world did not change,
you felt lighter and soul felt cleansed,
and you noticed the smiles among the frowns,
and drenched in what was your pain,
you found that little piece of joy again,
you followed the rainbow of life.
February 20, 2015 at 6:41 pm
Nice. I just also wrote a poet piece on rain!
February 20, 2015 at 6:53 pm
Thank you, will check yours out soon! 🙂
February 20, 2015 at 6:49 pm
Lovely! 🙂 ❤ Beautiful! ❤ and utterly gorgeous! ❤ 🙂
February 20, 2015 at 6:54 pm
Thank you so much my beautiful friend 🙂 ❤
February 20, 2015 at 7:49 pm
Wonderful write. Beautiful
February 21, 2015 at 3:04 pm
Thank you so much 🙂
February 21, 2015 at 5:04 am
Beautiful poem!~ Sending you all my best wishes!. Aquileana
February 21, 2015 at 3:05 pm
Thank you so very much Aquileana, best wishes back ❤ 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 10:17 am
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows.
May 19, 2015 at 11:13 am
Reblogged this on A Grateful Man and commented:
I loved experiencing this beautiful creation. It so well captures the feelings.
With Love,
Russ
May 19, 2015 at 11:15 am
Thank you so much for the reblog 🙂 and glad you enjoyed this piece 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 11:15 am
I greatly enjoyed experiencing this beautiful creation, and re-blogged it.
May 19, 2015 at 11:15 am
Thank you! ❤
May 19, 2015 at 11:30 am
Really enjoyed this! Had me take a deep look into myself
May 19, 2015 at 11:42 am
Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 12:39 pm
So powerful Neha …its raining today, but in a good way! “:)
May 19, 2015 at 2:20 pm
Thank you!!! ❤ ❤
May 19, 2015 at 5:42 pm
What a beautiful thought provoking poem. ❤
May 19, 2015 at 5:45 pm
Thank you so very much ❤
May 19, 2015 at 5:43 pm
Thanks for the share…exceptional poem. 😀
May 19, 2015 at 5:45 pm
Thank you!!!
May 19, 2015 at 5:58 pm
A.w.e.s.o.m.e.
May 19, 2015 at 5:59 pm
Thank you so much 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 7:03 pm
You are welcome. 🙂
May 23, 2015 at 6:21 am
It is touching and beautiful. Rain is not all about the pain, there is a beauty in there. It reminds me that when things get bad and tough don’t mean it will stay that way. All we have to do just stay, go through the rain without losing our faith. Sometimes it is easy to feel down when things being too hard that we let our faith slip through our finger replaced by negativity that can kill our soul. Leave us coldhearted. I like how this poem talking much too me in a simple way with the rain and the rainbow as its metaphor.
May 23, 2015 at 12:29 pm
aww thank you so much for the thoughtful message ❤ ❤ glad you could connect with it!