forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

57 thoughts on “Poetry

  1. trees are so lovely
    their arms in the breeze
    touch word and leaves

  2. And we love it! Always !πŸ’–

  3. Lovely and very inspiring ❀️

  4. Loved it, esp. β€œthe branches of life.” You expressed so much emotion in little words which hard to do sometimes. Well done. 😊

  5. as always, such loveliness in poetry and visual poetry (@—->—)

  6. I’m excited to read more of your work. This post made me smile ❀☺

  7. Men! That tree blends so well with the lines.

  8. and summer followed
    The leaves turned sour
    Yet she smiled
    ____________________
    (Couldn’t find the right words for the 4 line)

  9. I really liked your phrasing. Enjoyed the read, Thanks.

  10. i loved the use of negative space (the emptiness between the branches) as the space where you compose the poem; i feel like the poem you talk about is different than the poem we read; i like poems about poem; great job!

  11. Wow, that’s a powerful image and idea. Brilliant.

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  13. Lovely, evocative words. I love the metaphor!

  14. Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

  15. He also did the same….as that is the way you live the life…give your natural self in a natural way to the nature…Good piece…

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