forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Nonsense

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You go left
and you go right
and you turn around
for a fleeting thought
that passes your mind
and you try to remember
where exactly you are going…
is this new?
or was it something your left behind?
You go left
and you go right
sometimes nonsense rules the mind
and the chaos drives
you to keep going
until you pause and think
why are you moving
does it make sense
why this way and not that
so you go left and you go right
and as you get lost
you somehow find
this piece
that doesn’t rhyme
but holds the truth
you feel inside…

 

poetry and image copyright neha 2020

 

 

Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

25 thoughts on “Nonsense

  1. This was a really pleasing poem to read.

  2. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    WELL DONE NEHA!

  3. Confusion is the worst thing and it happens when you are not sure of where to go and how to go. The solution is simple. You should decide where you want to reach and plan how do you want to reach. When there is no confusion, you don’t have nonsense thoughts.

  4. I just have to say… this reminds me of the behavior of a dog!

  5. Chaos does gets you going. Amazing piece.

  6. excellent piece, I write some poetry but I do rhyme everything. But you seem to be able to write really good without rhyme. I guess the best at an art make things look effortless.

    Reading again your internal rhymes are what give it power.

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