forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Rain

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In quiet nights

when the heart rains…

with cloud of grief,

we know as pain…

silently falling,

against the mind…

and no space,

is enough to hide…

you know,

cause you have tried…

so you just lie,

under the moon,

and drift with the tune,

of the melancholic heart,

as it rains.

poetry copyright neha 2020/ image from pexels credit goes to original artist

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

21 thoughts on “Rain

  1. I actually just posted a micropoem about the rain as well. It’s pouring here and although I’ve grown to love rainy days, it brings a sense of gloom with it as well for me today. I cannot place my finger on why. This is a lovely, soothing poem, Neha!

    • Thank you my friend, i will go read your poem now! 🙂 Hope the sun shines behind the clouds and takes out the gloom in your heart or the rain slowly soothes away that feeling into a brighter one 🙂

  2. If you can’t run from the rain. . . just stuck getting soaked. . .

  3. This one really spoke to me, as rain has always been a thing with me! 🙂 Very lovely work.

  4. Superlative 😊👍lovely!!

  5. Very beautiful poem ma’am

  6. Loved this!! Beautifully penned! Bellissimo!!
    xoxo

  7. 💜thank you for such a beautiful poem!

  8. Wonderful, this moved my heart.

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