forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Lie

21 Comments

Somewhere in a yesterday
she lost a smile
that took away the ability
to breathe for a while
for she recognized the lie
that had disguised
as truth, in her heart.

 

free google image/ poetry copyright neha 2020

Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

21 thoughts on “Lie

  1. I think many of us fall prey to the lie. This is a beautiful expression of the struggles we all face from time to time.

  2. Ouch. I recognize myself in your words, Neha. The emotions are beautifully penned! xo

  3. Yes, that’s a complete thought.

    Still,

    Her losing a smile took her breath away?
    Rather, a lie did it?

    • Thank you for the visit and the question, I think sometimes it is not always a logical journey with poetry…I will leave it up to your interpretation, I appreciate the thoughtfulness behind your comments.

  4. Yet again fabulously amazing poetry❤️❤️❤️well done!!

  5. Nice. Lies and betrayal hurt.

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