thoughts from my mind to yours

Open #WritePhoto


There is an abstract displacement of sadness

open to interpretation for the mass

reading the diary of your face

opening doors that you try to keep shut…

but the wind of grief

swings them slightly

for all to take a peek

in the grey tunnels of your mind

where there is an abstract displacement of sadness.


poetry copyright neha 2019 / image borrowed from Sue Vincent
















In response to Sue’s Thursday #WritePhoto Prompt. πŸ™‚


Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

11 thoughts on “Open #WritePhoto

  1. That is fabulous, Neha…love the choice and economy of words.

  2. Ah, such Grooviness 😎

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  5. I absolutely love this, Neha! Yes, the inspiring photo with opening doors, yet showing the dark side of our existence at the same time, serves you perfectly well for your marvelous and profound poem about our lights and shadows. Your imagery is so beautiful and captivating. You touch my heart. I like that there is hope in the “abstract displacement of sadness”.

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