forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Cold Pebbles

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You did not know

where to begin

as you stood on the edge of your thoughts

trying to find sense

in the nonsensical rhymes

of the rain

pouring outside your window

tapping on the cold pebbles

of your heart

displacing  logic

a tad bit to the left

of what you felt was right…

you did not know.

 

poem and image copyright neha 2019

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

36 thoughts on “Cold Pebbles

  1. Sums up our random thoughts perfectly!

  2. I absolutely love this poem! Wow! So amazingly powerful!

  3. This is lovely, Neha!

    “tapping on the cold pebbles
    of your heart
    displacing  logic
    a tad bit to the left
    of what you felt was right…
    you did not know.”

    So powerful.

  4. Your poetry is beautiful and powerful !

  5. Wow you blend the analogy and our process within so beautifully!

  6. Your words are like soft song.

  7. I seriously loved this Neha.The profundity in your words moved me.Thanks for sharing this with us.

  8. Still, you wrote a beautiful poem about it. Just lovely!

  9. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    AW…AT LEAST THEY HAD A LITTLE FUN! 😀

  10. I really like the seamlessness of the weave between the pictures and the words, Neha! Amazing stuff!

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