You did not know
where to begin
as you stood on the edge of your thoughts
trying to find sense
in the nonsensical rhymes
of the rain
pouring outside your window
tapping on the cold pebbles
of your heart
displacing logic
a tad bit to the left
of what you felt was right…
you did not know.
poem and image copyright neha 2019
Advertisements
February 23, 2019 at 4:27 pm
Sums up our random thoughts perfectly!
February 23, 2019 at 4:42 pm
Thank you so much!
February 23, 2019 at 4:46 pm
I absolutely love this poem! Wow! So amazingly powerful!
February 23, 2019 at 4:52 pm
Thank you so much!
February 23, 2019 at 4:47 pm
This is lovely, Neha!
“tapping on the cold pebbles
of your heart
displacing logic
a tad bit to the left
of what you felt was right…
you did not know.”
So powerful.
February 23, 2019 at 4:52 pm
Thank you my friend, hope all is well!
February 23, 2019 at 4:53 pm
You’re most welcome. Thank you. Yes. All is good here. I hope the same for you.
February 23, 2019 at 4:54 pm
Yes, thank you. Have a great weekend!
February 23, 2019 at 4:56 pm
You’re welcome! You do the same!
February 23, 2019 at 5:12 pm
Your poetry is beautiful and powerful !
February 23, 2019 at 5:22 pm
Thank you so much Holly! ❤ I appreciate that coming from such a talented poetess as yourself!
February 23, 2019 at 6:54 pm
That’s so very sweet, but you are a wonderful writer and praise is well deserved! ♥️
February 24, 2019 at 3:52 pm
❤ ❤ Thank you kindly!
February 24, 2019 at 4:33 pm
♥️
February 23, 2019 at 7:13 pm
Wow you blend the analogy and our process within so beautifully!
February 24, 2019 at 3:55 pm
Thank you so much! ❤ ❤
February 23, 2019 at 9:08 pm
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
February 24, 2019 at 12:10 am
Your words are like soft song.
February 24, 2019 at 3:55 pm
Thank you so much!
February 24, 2019 at 11:21 am
Such Grooviness. 🥀😎
February 24, 2019 at 3:55 pm
Thank you Dorna!
February 25, 2019 at 7:56 pm
I seriously loved this Neha.The profundity in your words moved me.Thanks for sharing this with us.
February 26, 2019 at 1:10 pm
Thank you so much Megha!
February 27, 2019 at 2:10 am
This is absolutely stunning
February 27, 2019 at 10:08 am
Thank you so much!
February 28, 2019 at 9:59 am
Awesome
February 28, 2019 at 1:07 pm
Thank you!
February 28, 2019 at 7:32 pm
Most welcome dear
March 3, 2019 at 8:54 am
Reblogged this on Alessandria today @ Pier Carlo Lava.
March 6, 2019 at 11:02 am
Thank you for the reblog!
March 6, 2019 at 11:16 am
Still, you wrote a beautiful poem about it. Just lovely!
March 6, 2019 at 11:19 am
Thank you kindly!
March 6, 2019 at 11:19 am
You are welcome
March 7, 2019 at 10:51 am
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
AW…AT LEAST THEY HAD A LITTLE FUN! 😀
March 18, 2019 at 6:21 am
I really like the seamlessness of the weave between the pictures and the words, Neha! Amazing stuff!
March 18, 2019 at 9:33 am
Thank you so much!