forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

When you smile

35 Comments

When you smile,
my heart teeters on the edge of logic,
fluttering like a wild butterfly following the sun,
when you smile.

 

poetry and image copyright neha 2018

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

35 thoughts on “When you smile

  1. So sweet πŸ™‚ love it!

  2. I recently started writing poems here.
    I will be so grateful if you can suggest me something to improve my skills. πŸ™‚

  3. Aww, this is so lovely..how some smiles makes our heart flutter with joy.Loved this Neha.

  4. Beautiful and gentle as always!

  5. Sweet.. 😎πŸ₯€πŸ˜ŽπŸ₯€πŸ˜ŽπŸ₯€πŸ˜ŽπŸ₯€

  6. You have a pearl here my friend.

  7. Such bright words and imagery, reminds me of a certain Micheal Buble song, beautiful!

  8. Watch out for that smile! πŸ™‚

  9. I like this very much, and the image / photo you combine with it

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