thoughts from my mind to yours



The day unfolded,


as your mind drifted,

full of distractions.

A blatant contrast

to the serene light that fell on you,

as you laid out your thoughts


open like the skies,

infinite with possibilities,

of going anywhere…

but as the light faded into darkness

and the night sang the soft lullaby

you drifted again

to the beginning

or was it the end

in the circle of life.


poetry and image copyright neha 2018


Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

21 thoughts on “Unfolding

  1. Another nostalgic poem. This reminds me of the song “Safe and Sound” 😇💙

  2. love this. you really created the feeling of drifting….

  3. This sky…
    Lovely poem too.

  4. Brava.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀

  5. This is a beautiful circle of thoughts, Neha.

  6. I really enjoyed this. Like a lot. Thank you!

  7. Gentle, soothing and beautiful!

  8. Beautifully written ❤

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