That day…
The world forgot to be kind,
and you forgot to be patient,
and in between figuring out who you were,
and where you came from,
and why you were here,
the clouds of life,
poured on you,
and your heart cried with the rain…
but,
when it was over,
and though the world did not change,
you felt lighter and soul felt cleansed,
and you noticed the smiles among the frowns,
and drenched in what was your pain,
you found that little piece of joy again,
you followed the rainbow of life.
February 16, 2018 at 10:29 am
Beautiful poem! Your poem speaks to me of the power of self-acceptance. The poem speaks to me of revitalization. It speaks of hope. Thank you.
February 16, 2018 at 10:56 am
Thank you so much Roland for your thoughtful and reflective comment, I truly appreciate it!
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February 16, 2018 at 10:51 am
<3!!!!
February 16, 2018 at 10:52 am
🙂 Let me try that again… ❤ !!!! 🙂
February 16, 2018 at 10:56 am
I don’t see the other comment yet, but thank you Laura! ❤
February 16, 2018 at 10:57 am
hehe Thank you! ❤ ❤ See it now on the page but it wouldn't show up on the side bar…Happy Friday!
February 16, 2018 at 10:59 am
Beautifully penned!💕
February 16, 2018 at 10:59 am
Thank you so much!
February 16, 2018 at 12:25 pm
Beautiful,so much meaning and so well penned.
February 16, 2018 at 12:57 pm
Thank you so much!
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February 16, 2018 at 12:57 pm
Thank you for the share!
February 16, 2018 at 2:10 pm
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing and posting!
February 16, 2018 at 2:12 pm
Thank you so much!
February 16, 2018 at 2:30 pm
Absolutely gorgeous!
February 16, 2018 at 4:18 pm
Thank you so much!
February 16, 2018 at 2:39 pm
The analogy of life to the rain… beautifully penned… 🙂 ❤
February 16, 2018 at 4:18 pm
Thank you Maniparna!
February 16, 2018 at 4:56 pm
Fantastic trial and tribulations overcomed.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
February 17, 2018 at 11:42 am
Thank you my kind friend!
February 16, 2018 at 7:02 pm
Beautiful, uplifting words, my friend.
February 17, 2018 at 11:40 am
Thank you my friend ❤
February 17, 2018 at 4:12 pm
You’re very welcome my friend 😊
February 16, 2018 at 10:13 pm
Embracing … A day to remember.
February 17, 2018 at 11:41 am
Thank you so much!
February 17, 2018 at 8:49 am
Beautiful poem Neha. It almost made me want to cry along with you. 🙂
February 17, 2018 at 11:41 am
Thank you Brad!
February 17, 2018 at 11:10 pm
omg,this is toooooo good!
February 18, 2018 at 11:07 am
Thank you so much!
February 18, 2018 at 6:09 pm
Beautifully expressed, and so true. The world is only full of monsters, when one’s self-monster is leading the parade.
February 18, 2018 at 10:51 pm
Thank you so much!