forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Missing You

26 Comments

This notion of missing you

uncontrolled unplanned unexpected

a gaping hole in the heart

that gets flooded in invisible  tears

as your thoughts float in the mind

This notion of missing you

Where words fall short

to describe the million emotions

that float with the million memories

This notion of missing you

all of you

invisible strings pulling on my heart

making me misty eyed in the middle of the day

and I have nothing left to say

but hear old tunes of old times

This notion of missing you

 

poetry and image copyright neha 2018

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

26 thoughts on “Missing You

  1. It’s really how “missing you” feels Neha.
    You drafted these emotions perfectly

  2. A sublime piece. Certainly, it is worth revisiting it time and again just to experience that ineffable, deeply satisfying feel.

  3. Beautiful and poignant. Loved the picture you have used as it loosing the moments slowly.

  4. I loved how you made it into just an idea of missing you, all the while describing exactly how you feel, so beautifully done!

  5. Sweet Splendidness.. 😎🥀

  6. Wow, this one’s especially nice!

  7. exactly how i feel put into words, this is beautiful.

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