forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Asleep

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In between the branches of the human condition

you fall like fireflies of stardust

of dreams that travel through the world

of sparkling stars

burning through the cosmos

you fall,

gently,

softly,

tired,

you fall,

into the black hole…

asleep.

 

poetry and image copyright neha 2017

 

 

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

19 thoughts on “Asleep

  1. Someone has falling on the mind. What a beautiful description of falling towards sleep. i love the form – it’s almost concrete, demonstrating the fall itself. Love it as I am on the way towards that black hole itself πŸ™‚

  2. Oh my goodness, this is divine… x

  3. The moon can be so calming to the mind

  4. Again, such Excellence! 😎😎πŸ₯€πŸ₯€πŸ₯€

  5. Such a beautiful poem… Goes deep into our human condition !… very moving, dear Neha… hugs to you! ⭐

  6. Wow, I love all of your poetry. This one especially dragged my eyes down the page and they almost shut like the words were pulling my eyelids closed. Thank you for your beautiful words ❀

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