In between the branches of the human condition
you fall like fireflies of stardust
of dreams that travel through the world
of sparkling stars
burning through the cosmos
you fall,
gently,
softly,
tired,
you fall,
into the black hole…
asleep.
August 21, 2017 at 10:00 pm
Someone has falling on the mind. What a beautiful description of falling towards sleep. i love the form – it’s almost concrete, demonstrating the fall itself. Love it as I am on the way towards that black hole itself π
August 21, 2017 at 10:01 pm
Me too and thank you as always, have a good night! π
August 21, 2017 at 10:02 pm
π Good night!!! zzzzzzz
August 22, 2017 at 12:16 am
Oh my goodness, this is divine… x
August 22, 2017 at 7:44 am
Thank you kindly Diana!
August 22, 2017 at 12:23 am
The moon can be so calming to the mind
August 22, 2017 at 7:45 am
It can and thank you!
August 22, 2017 at 7:45 am
You’re welcome
August 22, 2017 at 3:43 am
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
August 22, 2017 at 7:46 am
Thank you my wonderful friend π
August 22, 2017 at 3:28 pm
You are very graciously welcome oh very wonderful lady.
August 22, 2017 at 7:28 am
Lovely poem Neha.
August 22, 2017 at 7:46 am
Thank you so much Brad β€
August 22, 2017 at 8:32 am
Again, such Excellence! πππ₯π₯π₯
August 22, 2017 at 8:36 am
Thank you my friend π
August 22, 2017 at 5:16 pm
Such a beautiful poem… Goes deep into our human condition !… very moving, dear Neha… hugs to you! β
August 22, 2017 at 8:10 pm
Thank you so much my dear friend and big hugs back β€
August 24, 2017 at 8:44 am
Wow, I love all of your poetry. This one especially dragged my eyes down the page and they almost shut like the words were pulling my eyelids closed. Thank you for your beautiful words β€
August 24, 2017 at 8:50 am
Thank you so much for visiting and your kind words! π