thoughts from my mind to yours

Under the moon


In quiet nights

when the heart rains…

with cloud of grief,

we know as pain…

silently falling,

against the mind…

and no space,

is enough to hide…

you know,

cause you have tried…

so you just lie,

under the moon,

and drift with the tune,

of the melancholic heart,

as it rains.

poetry and image copyright neha 2016

poetry and image copyright neha 2016

Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

32 thoughts on “Under the moon

  1. Great poem! Touches me deeply. Sadly I know this feeling too well.

  2. Thank you for allowing us to enjoy some time under the moon.

  3. Wanted to thank you for inspiring me. I put my words up as a poem and put a link to your blog on it.

  4. Beautiful heart-touching poetry, and perfect image to accompany. Blessings.

  5. Wow! Can claim to have done both – dancing with abandon in the rains and weeping wantonly without anyone noticing. Perfect capture of a sorrowful heart! Well done!

  6. Evocative poem Neha. I hope those dark clouds disappear.

  7. Yes, it does capture the sad heart.
    Love that moon photo. Those aren’t easy to capture.

  8. Very enchanting, Neha! Love that mystic about the moon and inner feelings.

  9. Beautiful

  10. Love the way your poetry flows, Neha. Sending love and light your way.

  11. love this piece Neha, just beautiful and true.

  12. Brillant and moving. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week πŸ™‚ ~amy

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