forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Asleep

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In between the branches of the human condition

you fall like fireflies of stardust

of dreams that travel through the world

of sparkling stars

burning through the cosmos

you fall

gently

softly

tired

you fall

into the black hole

asleep.

poem and image copyright 2015 neha

poem and image copyright 2015 neha

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

17 thoughts on “Asleep

  1. great opening line and wonderful simile and metaphor…:)

  2. Fireflies of stardust is just beautiful, Neha.

  3. I wonder what did the first people that fell asleep thought was actually going to happen to them? Did they know they would still wake up?..

  4. Ohhhhh, wonderful Neha. Did you post this one before? I thought I had read it before.
    πŸ™‚ ❀

  5. I loved the opening line… πŸ™‚

  6. Simply beautiful, Neha! β™‘

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