forgottenmeadows

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Under Quiet Rain

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You laid on the ground

under quiet rain

listening to the sound,

of thoughts, in your scattered brain

letting go the need to be foundโ€ฆ

as the drops poured on your pain,

you laid on the ground…

under quiet rain.

 

free google image, poem copyright neha 2015

free google image, poem copyright neha 2015

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

25 thoughts on “Under Quiet Rain

  1. “listening to the sound,
    of thoughts,”

    Nice line. I do that often.

  2. Oh, I know how this is. Thoughts making noise in my scattered brain. Sometimes all we can do is let it pass.
    The scattered rain sounds nice and peaceful though.
    ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

  3. Gah! I love love love this one!! โค

  4. That was wonderful, Neha ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. OH this could be either deliciously nice or SO Sad ….Bravo!!!

  6. I love everything about rain, and think perhaps it could wash away pain! Thanks for favoriting my post on twitter and then retweeting it, Neha! Hugs, N ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

  7. An imagery of serendipity. The feeling of letting the cool rain drops falling on the wounds and in the company of our thoughts – I can’t think of something more beautiful. Simply loved it ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. So moving!! โค

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