You laid on the ground
under quiet rain
listening to the sound,
of thoughts, in your scattered brain
letting go the need to be found…
as the drops poured on your pain,
you laid on the ground…
under quiet rain.
free google image, poem copyright neha 2015
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May 19, 2015 at 11:17 am
“listening to the sound,
of thoughts,”
Nice line. I do that often.
May 19, 2015 at 11:18 am
Thank you so much 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 11:26 am
Beautiful!
May 19, 2015 at 11:41 am
Thank you so much 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 11:38 am
Oh, I know how this is. Thoughts making noise in my scattered brain. Sometimes all we can do is let it pass.
The scattered rain sounds nice and peaceful though.
🙂 ❤
May 19, 2015 at 11:42 am
Yes 🙂 ❤ Thanks as always my friend 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 11:51 am
🙂 ❤
May 19, 2015 at 1:21 pm
Heyyy neha, just to let you know that I nominated you for the 5 photos/5 stories challenge. Of course it’s optional. You can check out the post here:
https://stacilys.wordpress.com/2015/05/19/romance-tanaga/
May 19, 2015 at 2:21 pm
aww thanks for the nomination I will be sure to check it out …Not sure if I will have time just yet to participate but I think I will once I do 🙂 Thank you again!
May 20, 2015 at 12:55 pm
You’re more than welcome Neha. I’m so glad you’re going to participate. And no worries about when you get around to it. I was nominated a few weeks to a month before I was able to get around to it.
🙂 ❤
May 19, 2015 at 11:53 am
Gah! I love love love this one!! ❤
May 19, 2015 at 12:15 pm
Thank you so much my friend 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 11:53 am
That was wonderful, Neha 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 12:15 pm
Thank you so much Richard 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 12:19 pm
Welcome 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 12:37 pm
OH this could be either deliciously nice or SO Sad ….Bravo!!!
May 19, 2015 at 2:20 pm
Thank you so much beautiful poetess 🙂
May 19, 2015 at 6:37 pm
I love everything about rain, and think perhaps it could wash away pain! Thanks for favoriting my post on twitter and then retweeting it, Neha! Hugs, N 🙂 ❤
May 19, 2015 at 6:38 pm
of course it was my pleasure 🙂 ❤ thank you for stopping by as always!
May 20, 2015 at 2:26 pm
An imagery of serendipity. The feeling of letting the cool rain drops falling on the wounds and in the company of our thoughts – I can’t think of something more beautiful. Simply loved it 🙂
May 20, 2015 at 3:36 pm
Thank you so very much 🙂
May 21, 2015 at 2:33 pm
It was a pleasure reading it 🙂
May 21, 2015 at 2:39 pm
Thank you very much 🙂
May 22, 2015 at 11:54 am
So moving!! ❤
May 23, 2015 at 12:27 pm
Thank you! 🙂