thoughts from my mind to yours

You did not know…


You did not know…

where to begin

as you stood

on the edge of your thoughts

trying to find sense

in the nonsensical rhymes

of the rain

pouring outside your window

tapping on the cold pebbles

of your heart

displacing Β logic

a tad bit to the left

of what you felt was right…

you did not know.

copyright neha 2014

Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

10 thoughts on “You did not know…

  1. Oh, how beautiful!! πŸ™‚ ❀

  2. This was amazing. The words, drew me in to a place I know and while there in the familiar….I smiled. ~Matthew

  3. Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:

    please click on original thank you πŸ™‚

  4. I like the way you used these words, especially the ‘edge of your thoughts’ part. So lovely and interesting, too. Very nicely done!

  5. Reblogged this on Poems and commented:
    brought me back to 2008 when I began writing verses

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