forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Muted

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You sat there…

muted

with your eyes

full of words

waiting,

to be asked,

the right questionโ€ฆ

that never came.

Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

22 thoughts on “Muted

  1. Ive been in that moment! Beautiful ….as ever ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. This poem sounds so much like what happens with many couples. The woman waiting for the questions, and the man totally not getting what’s in her eyes.
    I like the imagery of the eyes being full of words.
    I love this photo Neha.
    ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Heart deep, I felt it.

  4. Yes, you’ve captured something.

  5. The moment caught with the perfect words. Lovely!

  6. Poignant and hits the mark.

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  8. Your poem just inpired me to write a poem called The Never Opened Door.

  9. Oh! we all perhaps have experienced such moments..! so well worded… ๐Ÿ™‚

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