In between the branches of the human condition
you fall like fireflies of stardust
of dreams that travel through the world
of sparkling stars
burning through the cosmos
you fall
gently
softly
tired
you fall
into the black hole
asleep.
In between the branches of the human condition
you fall like fireflies of stardust
of dreams that travel through the world
of sparkling stars
burning through the cosmos
you fall
gently
softly
tired
you fall
into the black hole
asleep.
I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.
August 22, 2014 at 3:00 am
Beautiful words!! Touched my soul. Really enjoyed your other poems as well. Keep writing, keep spreading the light!
August 22, 2014 at 10:12 am
Thank you so much Radhika! π π
August 22, 2014 at 3:03 am
That was fantastic.
August 22, 2014 at 10:20 am
Thank you so much Richard! π π
August 22, 2014 at 10:22 am
Welcome π
August 22, 2014 at 3:29 am
Beautiful! π β€ Beautiful! π β€ Beautiful! π β€
August 22, 2014 at 10:13 am
Thank you so much!!!! β€ β€ β€
August 22, 2014 at 5:28 am
A wonderful description to loose yourself into. Beautiful.
August 22, 2014 at 10:13 am
Thank you so much!! π π
August 22, 2014 at 7:10 am
Immensely beautiful holding a sense of liberation and awareness, paradoxically, co’existing with the last stanza.
August 22, 2014 at 10:13 am
Thank you so very much! π π
August 22, 2014 at 11:01 am
This is fantastic! Makes me want to slowly..sink into a peaceful sleep π
August 22, 2014 at 11:03 am
Thank you so much π That is exactly what I did after I posted this poem last night hehe π
August 22, 2014 at 1:14 pm
Wow! This is SO cool, Neha!!! I didn’t see the moon, just the words and kept reading and when I did see the moon, and just said WOW outloud. Very cleverly written. Thank you. Love, Amy
August 22, 2014 at 1:25 pm
Thank you so much Amy!!! Much love to you have a lovely weekend! π
August 22, 2014 at 2:31 pm
Shall do. You too!! (((HUGS))) Amy
August 22, 2014 at 2:32 pm
Wonderful Neha. Wow, you came back with a real boom eh. Loving them.
π
August 22, 2014 at 2:50 pm
haha this just came to me before sleep last night, thank you so much! π
November 20, 2014 at 6:29 pm
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:
please click on original thank you π
November 20, 2014 at 10:31 pm
Breathtakingly beautiful.
November 21, 2014 at 9:15 am
Thank you so much π
November 21, 2014 at 8:54 am
Raymond Greiner, a frequent contributor to Indiana Voice Journal, sent me your link. I’m glad he did…your writing is outstanding in quality and beauty! Stirs the soul. Janine Pickett, Editor IVJ
http://www.indianavoicejournal.com
November 21, 2014 at 9:16 am
Thank you so much for visiting and your kind words, I just checked out the Indiana Voice Journal via your link… what a great way to showcase all the talent!