forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Fall

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In between the branches of the human condition

you fall like fireflies of stardust

of dreams that travel through the world

of sparkling stars

burning through the cosmos

you fall

gently

softly

tired

you fall

into the black hole

asleep.

 

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

23 thoughts on “Fall

  1. Beautiful words!! Touched my soul. Really enjoyed your other poems as well. Keep writing, keep spreading the light!

  2. Beautiful! πŸ™‚ ❀ Beautiful! πŸ™‚ ❀ Beautiful! πŸ™‚ ❀

  3. A wonderful description to loose yourself into. Beautiful.

  4. Immensely beautiful holding a sense of liberation and awareness, paradoxically, co’existing with the last stanza.

  5. This is fantastic! Makes me want to slowly..sink into a peaceful sleep πŸ™‚

  6. Wow! This is SO cool, Neha!!! I didn’t see the moon, just the words and kept reading and when I did see the moon, and just said WOW outloud. Very cleverly written. Thank you. Love, Amy

  7. Wonderful Neha. Wow, you came back with a real boom eh. Loving them.
    πŸ™‚

  8. Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:

    please click on original thank you πŸ™‚

  9. Raymond Greiner, a frequent contributor to Indiana Voice Journal, sent me your link. I’m glad he did…your writing is outstanding in quality and beauty! Stirs the soul. Janine Pickett, Editor IVJ
    http://www.indianavoicejournal.com

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