That night…
we spoke to our dreams,
lost in the reckless storm,
out in the sea…
we rose with the tides,
high and free,
That night…
That night,
we flew on the winds,
forgetting the ‘hows’ and ‘whys’
drenched under the wild skies,
we let go of our sins,
That night…
That night
we opened our souls,
to drown in love.
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I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.
June 9, 2014 at 4:34 pm
Ahhh, beautiful! Made me smile too. 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 5:02 pm
Thank you! 🙂 I am glad 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 5:32 pm
Lovely… so perfect!
June 9, 2014 at 5:54 pm
Thank you so much Audrey 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 5:39 pm
Oh Wowza, I’m crazy for this one, Neha! “Lost in the reckless storm”, “drenched under the wild skies”, “to drown in love”–yes, yes, yes! Sigh…..
June 9, 2014 at 5:54 pm
aww Thank you so much, Starr! I am so glad you like it 🙂 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 5:50 pm
You express yourself so well is magical, thanks Neha! 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 5:55 pm
Thank you so much H.J. ! 🙂 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 6:06 pm
This was absolutely breathtaking! Well done!
June 9, 2014 at 6:09 pm
Thank you so very much! I am glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 6:38 pm
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
OH, LOVE…LIFTING US BEYOND THE CLOUDS…YET THROUGH THE CRASHING SEAS!
June 9, 2014 at 6:41 pm
Thank you so much and for the reblog 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 6:44 pm
Sometimes I try to use my ‘one-liner’ to catch part of the meaning or find a narrative hook. I’m not always successful, but thank you!
June 9, 2014 at 7:03 pm
Meeting creation.
June 9, 2014 at 7:08 pm
Thank you! 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 8:08 pm
Excellent poem, Neha. Made me want to write an answer again. Thank you.
June 9, 2014 at 8:40 pm
Thank you so much Michael! 🙂 Feel free to add an answer if you think of anything 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 9:31 pm
I will. Thanks for making me welcome to do so. The other day was very spontaneous so I’m glad I did not overstep.
June 9, 2014 at 9:33 pm
Some days I get inspired from other poetry or words, the same way, so I understand 🙂 so as long as it is your muse and is not really changing my work or words it is perfectly alright 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 9:25 pm
“We let go of our sins to drown in love”
–Awesome. I love to let go of my sins and drown in love.
🙂
June 9, 2014 at 9:27 pm
Thank you Staci! 🙂 🙂
June 10, 2014 at 1:10 am
This was my favorite part to. The wild abandonment of all things that might hold them back.
Nice.
June 10, 2014 at 6:42 am
Thank you so much! 🙂
June 9, 2014 at 11:36 pm
Oh, this is so wonderful Neha!!! I love it!! 🙂 You really are an amazing poetess! 🙂
June 10, 2014 at 6:42 am
aww Thank you so much Line for always boosting me up with you words 🙂 🙂
June 10, 2014 at 5:34 am
Gorgeous my friend:)
June 10, 2014 at 6:43 am
Thank you so much 🙂 🙂
June 10, 2014 at 4:31 pm
Absolutely stunning!
June 10, 2014 at 6:28 pm
Thank you so much! 🙂 🙂
July 1, 2014 at 6:40 pm
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:
please click on original, thank you!
July 1, 2014 at 6:46 pm
I’m so glad you reblogged this! It’s nice to go back to favorites.
Because my experiences have changed recently, different lines grab me.
“forgetting the ‘hows’ and ‘whys’
drenched under the wild skies,”
The wild abandonment of this phrase reminds me of just being my true self…
much the way a little kid so freely views life. ~Marie
July 1, 2014 at 6:47 pm
Thank you so much Marie, I am glad you connected with it this way 🙂 ❤
July 1, 2014 at 9:52 pm
To drown in love….a lovers speech:)
Incredible poetry!!:)
July 1, 2014 at 10:08 pm
Thank you so much Zara ! 🙂