Hi Everyone,
I thought I would do a collaboration with you all… Or you can also use it as a prompt if you want for your own piece. If you wish to add to this piece please leave your part in the comment section. I will keep it open for three days and I will add whatever I get in the order I get them to the poem. If I don’t get anything this will be a stand alone but I hope some of you will give it a try 🙂
Update: I got some contributors yay! I will keep adding the contributions in different colours and list the name of each contributor ( in the same colour as their contribution)at the bottom of the piece. I am absolutely loving how this is going so far…will update as I get more up to the third day! 🙂 🙂 Thank you all!
Your naive heart,
flutter with the leaves,
waiting for rain,
by the window…
waiting for the gentle beat,
that sets your eager soul free,
to dance along,
by the window
By the window
watching gray clouds
coalesce with promise
rain to slake our thirst
The smell of dampness strong,
among the broken vessels
that lay weeping
sorrowfully against window’s pane
A rain long in its absence
Waits a few moments more
To tease the naivete out
And let longing take its place
By the window
Cracked glass,
but Incantation
Bonds the lens
Turns spidery veins
To condensation
Your shadow-self
Flittering silver
In reflection…
Raindrops clear as diamonds
calling for attention
rapping at your window,
and wait.
A reflection of a former you
Thoughts of what’s outside
Rain-patient, lucid inflection
Naivety reigns, still I watch
Distant clouds beckon,
A love to be renewed,
Waiting in the arms of silence,
By the window
Thunderous power spent
leaving rainbows in its wake
I feel the calm after the storm
as I live and breathe
by the window
Brilliant colors bloom
scenting your skin with sunsets
Gloaming nears, eyes alight
waiting to throw open the window
Dare I stay
A little longer
In the stillness
Between there and here.
Rushed by a spirited wind
my soul calls out to the clouds.
this window pain
in patience waits
for rain to bring clarity
to this window pane
Nightfall
Electrified by a sudden desire
Halcyon sun on the horizon
And the slow promise of the Night
By the window
Yearning for the rainbow
The sky’s very own
Vision of artistry
By the window
my imagination
flies free
more expansive
than the
universe
fits inside my
head
It frolics in
sunbeams
dances with
dust motes
leaping between
raindrops
to plunge in
darkness
on any given
day
by the window
There’s only me
By the window
Waiting for
My heart’s shadow
To escape
Through my soul’s door
And when, in time, I take my leave
a snapshot of love will come with me
for in my heart all want is gone
my freed soul waits for none
Contributors: Me (Neha), Annette Rochelle Aben, M. Zane McClellan, sporterhall, the landline blog, AKD, Starralee, avian101, Johny Ojanpera, julianmetta, M. Zane McClellan, avixenatgloaming, In the Stillness… Laurie’s Gentle Healing Notes, winterdandelion, Owlbert, Frédéric G. Martin, Original-Dante,M. Zane McClellan,reginadee2014,bluerock {aka debrazone}
June 3, 2014 at 4:44 pm
waiting for the gentle beat, that sets your eager soul free, to dance along, by the window
June 3, 2014 at 7:48 pm
Thank you so much have added your contribution to the piece 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 7:49 pm
That is beautiful!
June 3, 2014 at 4:47 pm
By the window
watching gray clouds
coalesce with promise
rain to slake our thirst
June 3, 2014 at 7:49 pm
Lovely, thank you so much Michael! have added it to the piece!
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June 3, 2014 at 5:11 pm
The smell of dampness strong,
among the broken vessels
that lay weeping
sorrowfully against window’s pane
June 3, 2014 at 7:50 pm
Wow, I love the turns this is taking…thank you so much your contribution has been added to the piece 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 12:13 am
You’re welcome and thank you for the invite! 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 5:13 pm
A rain long in its absence
Waits a few moments more
To tease the naivete out
And let longing take its place
By the window
June 3, 2014 at 7:50 pm
Beautiful, Thank you! Your contribution has been added to the piece 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 8:10 pm
Thank you for the opportunity! I love collaboration.
June 3, 2014 at 5:24 pm
Cracked glass,
but Incantation
Bonds the lens
Turns spidery veins
To condensation
June 3, 2014 at 7:51 pm
Nice! Thank you for sharing your piece it is now added : )
June 3, 2014 at 5:33 pm
Your shadow-self
Flittering silver
In reflection…
June 3, 2014 at 7:52 pm
O wow, I love it! Thank you Starr, I have now added it to the piece 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 9:49 pm
Oooh, fun–thanks!!
June 4, 2014 at 8:12 am
this window pain
in patience waits
for rain to bring clarity
to this window pane
June 4, 2014 at 8:13 am
oops, put this in wrong spot, sorry (:
June 4, 2014 at 8:44 am
It’s ok I got it 🙂 Will add it at the end , thank you for sharing it is beautiful 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 3:03 pm
Oh wowza, that’s good!
June 4, 2014 at 3:50 pm
my thoughts exactly 😀
June 3, 2014 at 5:37 pm
Raindrops clear as diamonds
calling for attention
rapping at your window,
and wait.
June 3, 2014 at 7:52 pm
Such a lovely imagery, thank you for sharing! I have added it to the piece 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 5:41 pm
A reflection of a former you
Thoughts of what’s outside
Rain-patient, lucid inflection
Naivety reigns, still I watch
June 3, 2014 at 7:54 pm
Thank you so much Johny, that is beautiful 🙂 I have added it to the piece 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 6:06 pm
Distant clouds beckon,
A love to be renewed,
Waiting in the arms of silence,
By the window
June 3, 2014 at 7:55 pm
So wonderfully peaceful, thank you for sharing, I have added to the piece 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 7:58 pm
Your kind words and the opportunity to contribute to a loving creative collaboration like this make me very happy. Love and light!
June 3, 2014 at 7:59 pm
It makes me happy too, to see everyone collaborate like this! 🙂 🙂 makes such a beautiful piece!
June 3, 2014 at 7:19 pm
fantastic ideas. My mind is drained though
June 3, 2014 at 7:56 pm
Thank you for stopping by and that’s ok 🙂 as long as you enjoy reading it 🙂 …and if you think of something later within these three day you can always add 🙂 ❤
June 3, 2014 at 8:00 pm
You’re welcome and I will. Thanks
June 3, 2014 at 9:57 pm
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TIME TO JOIN UP????? 🙂
June 3, 2014 at 10:00 pm
Thank you so much for the reblog Jonathan!
June 3, 2014 at 10:14 pm
ORT-ORT!
June 3, 2014 at 11:14 pm
Thunderous power spent
leaving rainbows in its wake
I feel the calm after the storm
as I live and breathe
by the window
June 4, 2014 at 9:00 am
another wonderful verse! Thank you Michael!
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June 3, 2014 at 11:40 pm
Brilliant colors bloom
scenting your skin with sunsets
Gloaming nears, eyes alight
waiting to throw open the window
June 4, 2014 at 9:03 am
Beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing I have added to the piece 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 12:16 am
http://lauriesnotes.wordpress.com/2014/06/03/awakening/
This is what I wrote using this as a prompt. ♡
June 4, 2014 at 2:25 am
Dare I stay
A little longer
In the stillness
Between there and here.
❤
June 4, 2014 at 5:43 am
Lovely, Thank you Laurie…do you wish for me to add it here or is it a stand alone ? Just wanted to check before I add
June 4, 2014 at 5:48 am
I came back and added this after writing on my blog. Whatever works 🙂 A little laurie note to use however you like. ❤
June 4, 2014 at 9:04 am
Thank you so much Laurie 🙂 I have added to the piece 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 7:34 am
Rushed by a spirited wind
my soul calls out to the clouds.
June 4, 2014 at 9:04 am
Lovely, I love it, thank you so much for sharing, it has been added 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 12:11 pm
Bonjour Chère Neha… here is my contribution – I hope you’ll like it 🙂 🙂
My name if you need: Frédéric G. Martin – http://poemsandpoemes.wordpress.com/
And thanks again for all what you are doing for poets & poetry
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Nightfall
Electrified by a sudden desire
Halcyon sun on the horizon
And the slow promise of the Night
June 4, 2014 at 12:53 pm
That is beautiful 🙂 Thank you so much for your contribution it has been added 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 12:58 pm
Thank you Neha! I’m glad you like!
June 4, 2014 at 1:04 pm
By the window
Yearning for the rainbow
The sky’s very own
Vision of artistry
June 4, 2014 at 1:16 pm
That is lovely, i really like the last line! Thank you so much for sharing it has been added 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 1:18 pm
Thank you Neha, i’m glad you like it 🙂 , by the way, this is an awesome post. I hope its the first of many.
June 4, 2014 at 1:25 pm
Yes, I am really enjoying this collaboration so I will definitely think of more pieces to do this with:) Thank you for joining in and contributing such a beautiful piece again 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 1:26 pm
You’re welcome, I believe bloggers should always be supportive of each other. 🙂
June 4, 2014 at 1:47 pm
🙂
June 5, 2014 at 5:36 am
Reblogged this on Original-Dante and commented:
A collaboration of creative minds. Thank you again for this opportunity forgottenmeadows. Check out her blog at https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/
June 5, 2014 at 7:11 am
Thanks so much for the reblog and I had a lot of fun 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 5:38 am
(Reblogged on Original-Dante)
June 5, 2014 at 6:05 pm
By the window
my imagination
flies free
more expansive
than the
universe
fits inside my
head
It frolics in
sunbeams
dances with
dust motes
leaping between
raindrops
to plunge in
darkness
on any given
day
by the window.
June 5, 2014 at 6:43 pm
O So lovely Michael! thank you so much for sharing I have now added this on 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 6:51 pm
It is a lot of fun reading the way everybody’s words form a collage. I hope you do this again some time. Thank you for having me included. 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 6:52 pm
Yes it is a lot of fun and I loved doing it so I will definitely have more of them 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 6:52 pm
and Of course!
June 5, 2014 at 6:56 pm
There’s only me
By the window
Waiting for
My heart’s shadow
To escape
Through my soul’s door
June 5, 2014 at 7:06 pm
Wow, Regina! That’s amazing thanks for sharing 🙂 It has been added 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 7:14 pm
Thank you for letting me join in 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 7:15 pm
Anytime! 🙂
June 5, 2014 at 10:06 pm
And when, in time, I take my leave
a snapshot of love will come with me
for in my heart all want is gone
my freed soul waits for none
June 5, 2014 at 10:11 pm
Oh I love it! Thank you for sharing, it has been added 🙂
June 6, 2014 at 4:32 am
I agree about the collage.. It is just beautiful. ❤
June 6, 2014 at 8:46 am
Thank you Laurie ❤ I love it !
June 6, 2014 at 4:46 am
This is amazing. So many gifts in a beautiful package:)
June 6, 2014 at 8:46 am
Thank you, I really like it as well 😀
June 6, 2014 at 2:18 pm
Loved it! Collaboration poems are my favorite! I was in the midst of surviving. So this served more as healing for me. And yes, as said above “gifts in beautiful packages.”
June 6, 2014 at 2:45 pm
Thank you so much I had a lot of fun with this …will be hosting more soon 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 2:33 pm
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June 6, 2014 at 2:45 pm
Thank you so much for the reblog 🙂
June 7, 2014 at 12:02 am
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:
And it is midnight! submissions is now closed and the project is complete! Thank you so much to all who joined in, spread the word and liked this collaboration 🙂 Will do more soon!
June 7, 2014 at 2:35 am
Oh Neha, this turned out wonderfully–and what fun it was to participate! I hope you’ll do it again sometime–thanks so much!!
June 7, 2014 at 7:41 am
I had a lot of fun to see it unfold as well and I will do another soon!
June 7, 2014 at 3:49 pm
Yippeee!
June 7, 2014 at 8:05 am
This was very cool, will participate in the next one:) looking forward to it:)
June 7, 2014 at 8:11 am
Thank you and yes I think I may start the next one sometimes this weekend! 🙂 I had a lot of fun doing this!
June 8, 2014 at 11:22 am
this is simply wonderful… thank you so much for offering the opportunity… CHEERS!
June 8, 2014 at 11:27 am
Thank YOU so much for joining in! I loved all the contributions! Cheers! 🙂
June 8, 2014 at 1:11 pm
Oh…this turned out so well…good for you! YAY!! Wasn’t able to contribute myself unfortunately but loved catching up now and reading all the contributions…beautiful! Would love to pop into the next one! 🙂
June 8, 2014 at 4:41 pm
Thank you so much Rob! 🙂 It’s ok glad you enjoyed it! The next one is still open so feel free to add if you think of something 🙂
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June 25, 2014 at 5:36 pm
I just am amazed at your talent and your friends who pitch in and help! I am enjoying reading but not creating. Hope it is okay just to drop in! smiles, Robin
June 25, 2014 at 6:10 pm
Thank you so much, they’re pretty great and of course you can drop in!! 🙂 You’re Always welcome!