I take a sip,
of the alluring skies,
With my tired eyes,
and my mind drifts…
way up high,
as I sigh,
on the painted colours of sunset…
I take sip.
Drifting Minds
forgottenmeadows
thoughts from my mind to yours
forgottenmeadows
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May 11, 2014 at 6:29 pm
very, very nice!
May 11, 2014 at 6:38 pm
Thank you very much! 🙂
May 11, 2014 at 6:58 pm
Drifts alluring sunset with skies high on tired colours and painted eyes. 😉
May 11, 2014 at 6:58 pm
haha Thanks!
May 11, 2014 at 7:01 pm
🙂
May 11, 2014 at 8:02 pm
Oh, so lovely Neha!! 🙂 🙂
May 11, 2014 at 8:09 pm
Thank you so much Line ! 🙂 ❤ Glad you liked it!
May 12, 2014 at 3:14 am
Oh I love the image-concept of taking a sip of the skies–wonderful!
May 12, 2014 at 6:31 pm
aww Thank you so much! 🙂
May 12, 2014 at 3:17 am
Borrow a sip? 🙂
May 12, 2014 at 6:31 pm
Anytime! 🙂
May 12, 2014 at 11:07 am
I really like the images in your words.
May 12, 2014 at 6:29 pm
Thank you so much! 🙂
May 12, 2014 at 5:41 pm
Hi. This is for you. No give backs! http://iithinks.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=4309&action=edit&message=6&postpost=v2
May 12, 2014 at 5:43 pm
here is the proper link (If you can delete the other one)
http://iithinks.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/creme-de-la-creme-award/
May 12, 2014 at 6:20 pm
Thank you so very much Ihsan, I am most honoured and humbled by your recognition! 🙂
May 12, 2014 at 6:37 pm
Youre very welcome. Its well deserved 🙂
May 12, 2014 at 8:17 pm
this was a great poem. Also like the image
May 12, 2014 at 8:18 pm
Thank you so much! 🙂 I am glad you liked it!
May 12, 2014 at 8:22 pm
You’re welcome
May 13, 2014 at 7:25 pm
Fine work, Neha!
May 13, 2014 at 7:36 pm
Thank you so much, Laura! 🙂
July 2, 2015 at 5:27 pm
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows.
July 3, 2015 at 6:37 am
I really like this one. I’m “with it” as I’m reading it.
July 3, 2015 at 9:04 am
Thank you so much glad you liked it 🙂