forgottenmeadows

thoughts from my mind to yours

Asleep

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Thousands of miles away,
you lay there asleep…
eyes closed,
to
grass,
flowers,
birds,
sun,
me,
thousands of miles away,
you lay there….
asleep.

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Author: forgottenmeadows

I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.

27 thoughts on “Asleep

  1. I truly like the depth of your poetry and the simplicity with which you communicate it. And yes, blogging is difficult. Keeping with the writing, with the comments, with those who follow in order to maintain community. But it is so worth it. Welcome, and thank you for visiting mine.

    • aww thank you so much for your kind words πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked it and thank you for stopping by, the welcome and the follow…I enjoyed your post and look forward to reading more of your work! πŸ™‚

  2. This is an emotional poem for me. I feel a touch of longing, perhaps sadness or regret when I read this.

    Beautifully done!!

  3. one part of my heart says its peaceful, the other says it is sad, which one is speaking the truth?

  4. I love your poetry for it is both simple and profound, thank again for all these beautiful words!

  5. Breathtaking! Thank you so much, Lor. How I long to slip into this photograph for just a moment. (sigh) Love, Amy

  6. Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:

    please click on original

  7. So Lovely…reminds me of the Movie Heidi for some reason πŸ™‚

  8. I must agree with Ms Fox’s description of your writing–such deep simplicity, wonderful.

  9. Is this poem about me?
    I like it, sounds familiar! πŸ™‚

  10. Neha you are taking me somewhere through your poems.yesterday i missed this beautifull poem.Thanks for reading my simple poems πŸ™‚

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