I had seen you approaching me at a distance,
I was driving in the fog,
And between the smiles and fluttering heart,
your sunshine blinded me,
and then you were right there,
everywhere,
in front of me, in my mind, within me,
I fell in love.
I had seen you approaching me at a distance,
I was driving in the fog,
And between the smiles and fluttering heart,
your sunshine blinded me,
and then you were right there,
everywhere,
in front of me, in my mind, within me,
I fell in love.
I am a dreamer and a writer who loves to ponder on the words of the soul.
March 28, 2014 at 6:18 pm
I love this poem too! Your style is so refreshing =)
March 28, 2014 at 6:19 pm
aww thank you so much! π
June 14, 2014 at 2:11 pm
Reblogged this on forgottenmeadows and commented:
please click on original
June 14, 2014 at 4:00 pm
I love those flowers so much–and the poem too!!
June 14, 2014 at 10:55 pm
Very nice poem Neha! π
June 14, 2014 at 10:56 pm
Thank you so much! π
June 16, 2014 at 7:43 am
yes i saw me driving the car seeing that flower.nice poem π
June 16, 2014 at 8:59 am
Thank you π
June 17, 2014 at 10:29 am
Reblogged this on UPON HIS DEATH BED and commented:
Forgotten Meadows . . .
June 17, 2014 at 10:30 am
Thank you so much for the reblog and message π Much appreciated!
June 17, 2014 at 10:31 am
Hi Neha, I hope this is the correct location to post this poem.
SHADOWS IN A DREAM
By Kharis Macey
Move on, move on,
Oh sad and lonely soul.
Your eyes are athirst
For the water in a mirage;
In truth, the jug was never as large
As you recall.
As thus, youβre longing and lingering
For a false love;
For sooth, it was never there at all.
Look ahead, look ahead,
Be careful, lest you fall again,
For the figurine in your dream
Will crack and tumble down,
It will break and scatter on the ground.
Alas, itβs the shards of glass to penetrate your heart
For wanting what was never yours.
Arise, move on, move on,
Oh dreamer of the night.
June 17, 2014 at 10:33 am
Hi Kharis, this is not the right place but I can take it from here but if you want this is actually the link where you have to post it to so that people can see your post in the comments as well π https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2014/06/15/calling-all-poetscreative-minds-in-a-land-of-forgotten-dreams/